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Pam Sikora's avatar

*writers, not readers. Readers benefit from writers taking this advice!

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Pam Sikora's avatar

I’m thinking this article is giving advice that readers should be following! (12 words)

[2nd draft] I think readers should follow this article’s advice! (8 words, down 1/3)

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Keri Wyatt Kent's avatar

Beautiful!

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Tim Fall's avatar

After a draft or two I use the search function for “ing” and then chop gerunds, rewrite sentences, delete paragraphs. A close focus on those three letters opens my eyes up to lots of ways to edit for better flow.

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Keri Wyatt Kent's avatar

Great strategy. The search function in Word really helps. I love that you remind us "after a draft or two" because rewriting is the key to good writing.

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